Evaluation of our first draft of the trailer

In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media texts? (Evaluation of our first draft)

After completing our first draft we have made these observations:

What has been successful in our first cut: 

- the positioning of the clips

- the use of white noise 

- the music chosen (which has appropriate dynamics)

- the shots of Charlie watching the youtube video 

Codes and conventions used:

- quick cuts

- anchorage and inventive ways of getting in anchorage (google)

- dialogue

What we need to change/add:

- add reviews in forms of Facebook posts

- change the font of the anchorage

- add the name and release date of the film

- add clips with higher quality footage and camera work

- add credits page

- add a wash to make it more blue and technological 

- close ups on face 

- computer screen light on face clips

This is the link to our first cut on YouTube:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Faz-yaGGiHA&feature=youtu.be